azyl academy large print edition chris vines

In the first 80% of the novel we have one minor scuffle with an arrogant young noble to set him up as the antagonist we then get three or four training fights in the remaining 20%, and the climax of the novel takes up the last four pages. That's not completely a bad thing - I always think it's ridiculous when 14-year-old kids are constantly in life or death fights - but this takes it a little too far. There's not a lot of conflict going on either. There is just not a lot of plot going on. Sure, being told by a god that you have to save the world would be pretty good motivation, but we get no hint as to what he has to save the world from. The whole book essentially is 'went to class and learned something, trained, ate lunch, went to class and learned something, trained, went to sleep' and then rinse repeat for days on end. It is basically a daily journal of the main character's time at the magic academy, and being a super dedicated student is just not very exciting. The magic system isn't revolutionary - just a typical cultivation system from xianxia stories - but it is coherent and makes sense. using 'drug' instead of 'dragged'), but on the whole the editing is to be commended. A few minor typos, and some strange word choices that I suspect are a result of the author's dialect (e.g. The good: the grammar and formatting is quite good for a self-published novel. The story doesn't make any real effort to get away from the tropes of the genre, so if you're familiar with stories like this you can predict how the plot goes. The premise is pretty standard for isekai stories: guy gets hit by a truck and then reincarnates in a different body as the 'chosen one' of his new world. This isn't awful for a first effort from a new author, but there is significant room for improvement.

Azyl academy large print edition chris vines